Saturday, July 1, 2017

Legend: Stopping a Mob

It has been a while since I shared a story. That is partially because I haven't been able to write much lately. However, I recently had an idea and so wrote up a quick draft of a legend to further build up the character of the prince. At some point I hope to return and elaborate on it, but I hope you enjoy the current draft.

J. D. Nyle

Legends: How the Prince Stopped a Mob

Long ago, there was a certain foreigner who took residence inn the castle town. He was a good man and a skilled blacksmith. His shop was fairly successful due to the high quality set at decent prices. However, one man of similar trade became envious of this success and so began to incite people against him. Soon enough, he gathered enough people with prejudice into a mob and they began matching towards the Foreigner's shop.

When they arrived, the foreigner was nowhere to be seen. The mob was about ready to destroy the shop when a man came running. He said, "He's not here! Follow me!"

The mob followed the man to a house. One of the mob, realizing it was the house of another member called out, "What is he doing in your house?! Hand him over to us or we will burn it down!" The accused answered, "I don't know. He's not there under my protection. That's for sure."
"You're lying, aren't you?! I've seen you by his shop before. Admit it! You're protecting him!"
"I'm not. I'll go grab him myself if he's there!"
Just then, another man came running and calling out, "He's not here anymore! Follow me!"
The mob followed the man, but the accused quietly dropped out of the mob. As the mob moved further away, he heard a voice say, "Scary, wasn't it? The mob attacking an innocent man?"
The man turned and saw the Prince.
The Prince continued, "A flame it's a very useful thing, but let it grow uncontrollably and it will only lead to destruction rather than progress. Just like the irrational mob. In this case and quite often, the target is a good and innocent man. And if it were not for another man, you too.
The man behind this mob is merely envious of the success. It's a shame he didn't use his charisma for good instead."
"Won't you do anything to stop this madness?"
"In due time"
The mob continued to follow the man to another house where a similar breakout occurred. Then another man came and left them to another place. This process continued for some time and members of the mob snuck away either due to exhaustion or internal strife and then the Prince would talk with them is like the first. Eventually the group found the man they were after. The leader of the mob step forth and said, "We finally found you. We don't want your kind in this town. Time to teach you a lesson you'll never forget. Let's get him!"
Just then, the Prince stepped in between and said, "That's far enough. We already know the true purpose of this mob is to remove competition for you."
"What are you talking about? We're here to protect our town. If the king won't, then we will! Let's go, men!"
No one moved to the leader's surprise. The Prince responded, "The Court's investigation had already found this man to be perfectly innocent and good but you to be the real perpetrator because of your envy of this man's success in your trade. Now let me ask you something. What happens to the leader of a mob when the mob no longer exists?"
The mob leader looked around and realized what had happened. "Knights!" He exclaimed. "You replaced my men with knights!"
"Exactly. And now you are under arrest for inciting the mob against the innocent."
And that is how the prince stopped a mob.

Sunday, June 4, 2017

May 2017 Update

Sorry for the late post. On the other hand, there is some good news. I found an artist who says he wants to do the art for Shining's book. I had him do a brief demo to see if he can pull of what I have in mind. The first stage looks promising. If the final work of the sample is good, then I will have found my artist. The timing is good because I think I finally figured out a design that would be perfect for the book. Beyond that, I've been working on the "Writer's Notes" that I will include at the end of each chapter as promised. This is something I've wanted to do for a long time, perhaps even while I was writing the original draft almost 10 years ago. I am really excited to hopefully publish the book soon. To be fair, I was optimistic last year at the same time but was disappointing by my old artist never contacting me again. Hopefully this will fair better.

J. D. Nyle

Monday, May 1, 2017

April 2017 Update

Thinking back about The Legend of Zelda: Breath of the Wild, there is one thing it got me thinking about. While my mindset for the new book has been to write it as a book and not like a video game as was the case with Shining, there are some checks that help when thinking from a game design. In this case, the freedom.

While my party of characters will traverse each "shrine" in a particular order, I started to wonder why. Each of these places were created independently and therefore should have no dependency upon each other. Also, it would be interesting to see this turn into a video game. While I will like to build up things, there is one particular shrine that I might need to rethink.

On another note, it was interesting to see a gameplay element in the new Zelda game that I used in Shining. It's one of the things that is fun to play with and I look forward to trying something with it here as well, I might even take inspiration from what people do on youtube with that ability.

That's all for now. I am still looking for artists to do the cover art for Shining if anyone is interested. You can apply via the google form here.

J. D. Nyle

Saturday, April 1, 2017

March 2017 Update

So I got to sit down and play through the new Legend of Zelda game, and while there weren't any major story inspirations for me, it did get me to consider the inclusion of side-plots. I probably won't include any thing more than what I've already thought of, but it might be useful to include side-plot lines in order to maintain the sense of adventure.


I'm also giving up on my old artist to provide cover artwork for Shining since I haven't been able to contact him for more than half a year. If you know anyone who is interested, please fill out this form. https://goo.gl/forms/FBGpPQa4p1EhTOp02


Beyond that, there isn't much of an update as I spent the month traveling, playing Zelda, and spending time with family. However, as I look at my family, I feel more motivated to create a story they can enjoy. So hopefully I'll make some progress with the new novel in April.


J. D. Nyle

Saturday, February 18, 2017

February 2017 Update

    February has continued the streak of being a busy time for me, but I did manage to write some dialogue for my next book. One of the issues with writing a book is writing good dialogue especially with more than two people. While some TV shows do a good job of developing it's many characters over the course of time, what is a good way of doing that within one book? One way I'm trying is to give them meaningful dialogue where we learn about their past indirectly and how it's affected them. Other is to see the little things they do and focus on. I'll try to utilize that, but I do know it's important to make sure they aren't flat either. However, that does bring an interesting question. Where do flat characters belong?
    In Hamlet, there are two characters where you can swap lines and not tell the difference. There is certainly a place for these sort of characters, possibly for humor, but I'm still experimenting with where. I'm aware that some characters in Shining ended that way and hopefully my next cast of secondary characters won't follow suit.
    Do I expect to make more progress in the coming weeks? No. I'll be busy with work and other duties, and I want to play the new Legend of Zelda game as well. From what I've heard, they have a nice story so maybe I can learn a few techniques from the game. I am curious to ponder if the story will be nice on its own or if it requires knowledge of the series for its effect.

Take Care,
J. D. Nyle

Wednesday, January 25, 2017

January 2017 update

I don't have much of an update this month. I can say I am disappointed in that I haven't received an update from my artist and potential publisher. As a result, I am tied of waiting after 6 months and searching for replacements unless I finally hear back.

On the bright side, I now have a new member of my household, though it means I really have no time to write my next novel. I hope to find time and energy to write as one of my hopes is to create a thriving series for my children to enjoy. I often find that I am disappointed with modern series and I would like to create something that my children can enjoy through adulthood. I certainly have lots of stories, I just need the ability to focus on developing then and then to find people who won't take months or years to respond.

On a completely different note to compensate for not having an solid update, here is my initial impression of the new Legend of Zelda game. You are probably well aware that the series has been an inspiration for me. As such, I am excited to play the new game and see what they do. I have only watched the trailers in order to maintain the sense of exploration, but I have to admit that the more I see, the more I am reminded of Studio Ghibli. It just gives me the feeling similar to Nausicaa, Princess Mononoke, and Castle in the Sky. To be fair, that would be an excellent match as both Nintendo and Studio Ghibli follow their own ideas apart from their respective industries.

One hope I have is for it to be fun and easy to start. Recent games can take a long time to start. While Ocarina of Time can take about 15 to get to the first dungeon, Twilight Princess can take hours. One of the great things about the Zelda games is that the general enemies normally take 1-3 hits to defeat and they are spaced out so that you don't get bored so easily. This makes the hands fun to replay, but if the introduction is long, then I don't want to replay.

Similarly, the ability to skip annoying sections would be welcomed. The game is supposed to allow you to go about freely a the is hope that I can avoid sections I don't like. For example, in Skyward Sword, I like the general game, but when I think about the Silent Realm and Demise sections, I give up on the idea of replaying. Since it is said that you can fight the final boss immediately, I have some hope for this new game.

As for the art style, I like it. It seems like the visuals should age well, making the game playable for a long time. If my cover art was a similar style, I wouldn't protest, though I would request for it to be less Anime-like. However, I do find Romantic art to be very nice for Fantasy novels. We'll see what I eventually end up with.

J. D. Nyle

Wednesday, December 14, 2016

Universe Plan

With the release of the new Star Wars movie, and one that explicitly does not center on a Skywalker, I figured you might be interested in what my plans for writing Neostriker are. Specifically if I intend to follow the same approach as Lucas did in centering on a family. The answer is no. There a few stories that center on a family line, but there are also a few that are planned to be completely unrelated.

As I plan the Neostriker universe, I'm planning it to be just that. That means Neostriker will take parts across the world, even though it certainly has its origin story rooted in a family line. In fact, I would like to write stories taking place before as well as after. I don't know about doing prequels yet, but I think telling stories that take place in the world before Neostriker would be interesting.

As for the end goal, I don't have one yet. An idea about converging everything together for an epic has crossed my mind, but I feel like that would be too ambitious or would basically be redoing Shining. So at the moment, I just want to write stories. Hopefully I can start again sometime soon.

J. D. Nyle